Suspense of Good News
A short story by Kandarpa Kalita
Illustration by Arup Baishya
The office canteen was buzzing with the news for sometime
that ‘five days week’ was on the offing. In one evening he hesitantly revealed this to
his wife. Without asking for any
details, she quipped “OK, will agree when it happens!”. Their teen daughter
smiled for no reason.
One of his junior colleagues told him that the matter would
be considered in the board meeting next
week. That night his wife was angry for
something else. He couldn’t gather the courage to tell her that there is some
real progress !
The day before the board meeting he thought of breaking the
good news, but finally postponed. The
meeting is on Friday and it would be better to reveal next morning with
the proof by staying back home.
On that day, a positive vibe was visible among all
employees. The receptionist looked prettier and was in all smiles. The office
assistant provided a new crunchy biscuit with morning tea and that was offered without
his regular grunting about the other assistants coming late. By the late
afternoon, they became anxious to hear
from the other office assistant serving coffee
in the meeting held in a hotel. He will
break the news to the admin in a WhatsApp message. In case it was an order from
her -“First message me for sure !”. The
agenda number nine came up after the refreshment was served. The office
assistant could follow English a bit. He was
going very slow while collecting the cups and trying to listen what
“Director Sir” was saying. The message
came- “It looks like done!”.
That day the employees, who earlier would have already left
at five were also staying back, waiting for the Finance Manager’s call for
confirmation. He was not expected to call or message during the meeting. Finally
he called “It is fifty-fifty again, will go for Trustee approval”.
Next morning, he noticed at home that the mother- daughter duo
were whispering something. Did he reveal anything ? Did they overhear any call
? He hurried off to office to avoid creating
any further doubt about the suspense of good news.
I liked it. It's a nice suspense short story.
ReplyDeleteKudos to Arup.
ReplyDeleteSuspense....saying.many things...felt a tinge of O henry short stories...you should write more frequently.
ReplyDeleteNatya Rabha
ReplyDeleteI feel enjoy to read short story suspense. Suspense is character of man.
Good story...
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the story.
ReplyDeleteI like it, Nice to read
ReplyDeleteVery nice 🙏
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ReplyDeleteপঢ়ি ভাল লাগিল।
ReplyDeleteNice Story, short yet enjoyable.
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